why oh why oh why!!! even this recent story has such a dark, foreboding tone to it eh? i wrote another one, its juz in my another computer in aus n u pple would be so disappointed in me. its an emo one too.. RAWR!!!!!!

" The smell of coffee was in the air as I sat down at the table." it's such a nice, cosy way of starting a story. wad can go wrong, until i lead it to a society where all has gone wrong. m i usually this emo? even i dunno where i was trying to go with that. i had no plot wadsoeva. HELP!!!

come on jello, im sure i can write a nicer happier n better story ya? or is this juz my style? the kind where u have a mental picture of me going" MUAHAHAHA!! IT LIVES!!" and me dressed in black(which i have a lot of), emo hair n smoking a cigarette... hmmm.. is tt really me?

care to comment on the story anyone?

...penned by joello at 10:15 AM
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